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You laugh as i try to scratch away my jaged edges,
So as not to be cast away by this rough-hewn world.
Etching away, The scratches run deep,
Bleeding from the innermost parts of my heart.
Tear away the layers...
An empty soul, a broken heart,
Shatered into a million pieces,
Throbing, pulsing,
Yearning to be accepted.
©2005-2009 ~canyousaveme
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Thought this up while i was laying in bed trying to fall asleep... its a tad bit extream and not quite finished... i may update it later.

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in short brilliant poem i felt exactly the same at one point in my life. theres is a level of acceptance i disire even still, but i feel im the one who was in control of ripping myself apart... not so much for this world but for the sake of my own :D in the end dont let the world tear you down that responsibility lies with you. :D

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Nice/cool. I see the wonderful emotion put into this piece. It makes me think back to the times in my life that I observed people do anything just to belong. So sad...Anyways, woo!

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