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Afterthoughts by ~canyousaveme:iconcanyousaveme:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Sociopolitical > Fixed


A shadowy corridor,
An arrogant smile.
A snowy field,
A streak of blood.
A rundown bar,
Shatered glass.
A muddy puddle,
A forgotten rose.
An empty graveyard,
An eirie mist.
©2005-2009 ~canyousaveme
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Author's Comments

written while watching cowboy bebop real folk blues pt 1

haha the catagory was just sorta um randomish... after all vicious and spike were in the syndicate so wouldn't u say thats almost politicalish? i know i know this probably should be put in scraps but i just couldn't <.< (Don't chew me out i'm innocent i swear! :innocent:)

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~TimeYetToDream Mar 20, 2005, 8:17:13 PM
It has potential, I'll give you that. Take a long look at it, then rework it for flow, rythm and rhyme; I'm convinced you will be pleased with the results. Then again, perhaps it's not your style to rewrite an old piece. I know it's not mine so I can respect that.

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The sensation of clarity clouds judgement... therefore, I know that I am thinking clearly when everything looks so cloudy out.
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~canyousaveme Mar 20, 2005, 10:26:13 PM
thanx i might just try and do that and if it dosn't work out well... oh well : )

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Everything will be ok in the end. If its not ok, its not the end.- Unknown Author
Is there an indelible line dividing sanity from insanity, or do they change one into the other at the slightest turn of events. - Vincent - Cowboy Bebop Knockin' on Heaven'
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~TimeYetToDream Mar 21, 2005, 1:59:12 PM
If it doesn't work out... then at least you can say you tried! XP

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The sensation of clarity clouds judgement... therefore, I know that I am thinking clearly when everything looks so cloudy out.
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~Kitty-Yasashii Mar 23, 2005, 6:17:04 PM
Interesting...*o.o* If you like stuff like that, then you will love the Christmas poem I wrote. Check the comments on my page to see how bored I was.

~P.S.-I love Cowboy Bebop!!!

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"If I had a dime for every time you used the word destiny, I'd be even richer."-Seto Kaiba
"This is the part where you're supposed close your eyes"-Alucard (Hellsing) ===>[link] The best club on DA!
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~canyousaveme Mar 24, 2005, 6:46:58 PM
yay! a fellow bebop lover! definitely my favorite anime of all time
thanks for stoping by : )

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Everything will be ok in the end. If its not ok, its not the end.- Unknown Author
Is there an indelible line dividing sanity from insanity, or do they change one into the other at the slightest turn of events. - Vincent - Cowboy Bebop Knockin' on Heaven'
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~Kitty-Yasashii Mar 25, 2005, 3:52:21 PM
Your welcome :)

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"If I had a dime for every time you used the word destiny, I'd be even richer."-Seto Kaiba
"This is the part where you're supposed close your eyes"-Alucard (Hellsing) ===>[link] The best club on DA!
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~Blood-Red-Ice Mar 28, 2007, 1:01:37 PM
That's really cool. Hey is there anyway you can watch it online?
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